Talk:Love. Angel. Music. Baby. (The Remixes)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 01:55, 28 July 2016 (UTC)

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review for your GAN:

Lead

 * (EP) by → (EP) recorded by
 * singer-songwriter means she's writing what she's singing all my herself (like Ed Sheeran), which I think she doesn't; change to "recording artist"
 * 2005 by → 2005 through
 * the album was only → the record was only; you use "album" twice here
 * It features remixes → It incorporates remixes; you use "features" twice here
 * try to bring the fact that it was released digitally in the opening sentence and remove the non-charting info, as it is overflous

Background and release

 * Gwen Stefani's debut → Stefani's debut + unlink her
 * six singles: "What → six singles—"What
 * The remix → A remix
 * and in the → and within the
 * of Canada → of the record charts in Canada
 * chart, for → remove comma
 * You use "remixed" twice here; try to reword
 * vocals from reggae artist Elán. → the vocal collaboration of reggae artist Elán; this version was also used on a 2005 remix EP for "Hollaback Girl"
 * was released as a digital download on November 22, 2005 in the United States only by Interscope Records. → was made available for digital download in the United States on November 22, 2005 through Interscope Records, with its sound being inspired——similar like its original counterpart——by dance and electropop music.
 * Remove last sentence

Track listing

 * Place the note above, as you did on 'credits and personnel'
 * Track listing and credits from digital liner notes and AllMusic. → Track listing and credits adapted from the album's liner notes and AllMusic

Credits and personnel

 * Credits for Love. Angel. Music. Baby. (The Remixes) adapted from its digital liner notes and parent album liner notes. → Credits adapted from the album's liner notes.
 * Why isn't Gwen Stefani placed atop; her last name begins with "s"

Outcome of GAN review
for 7 days. You've done a good job with the article, apart from some word repetition and few grammar issues. Good luck! Cartoon network freak (talk) 01:55, 28 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Finished. Thank you so much! Carbrera (talk) 16:30, 28 July 2016 (UTC).
 * Passing. Could you take any of my GANs on review? I would appreciate that. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:24, 28 July 2016 (UTC)