Talk:Love (Destiny)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 20:10, 27 September 2016 (UTC) →

Soon... Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:10, 27 September 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Ayumi Hamasaki. It served as the second single from Hamasaki's second studio album Loveppears (1999). → Ayumi Hamasaki, serving as the second single for her second studio album, Loveppears (1999).
 * There are three official versions of the single: a ballad version arranged by Tsunku, an edited version featuring vocals by Tsunku, the vocalist of the band Sharan Q, and a dance-influenced version that was included on Loveppears. → Three versions of the recording have been made available—a ballad version arranged by Tsunku, an edited version with vocals by Tsunku, and a dance-influenced version included on Loveppears.
 * Link music critics to "music journalism"
 * music critics. Some highlighted → music critics, with some highlighting
 * Commercially, the single → Commercially, the recording
 * was a success → experienced success
 * her first record → her first song ("record" is mainly used for album releases)
 * It became → It also became
 * entered again on both record charts → and re-entered both charts.
 * which featured → and featured
 * singing the song → singing to the song
 * To promote the single → In order to promote the single
 * link "remix and greatest hits compilations" to their respective articles on Wikipedia
 * It was used → It was also used
 * official theme song → remove "official"
 * the Japanese → Japanese
 * To date, it is → To date, it remains
 * highest selling → highest-selling

Infobox

 * Digital download → digital download
 * Remove full stops after each caption

Versions and composition

 * I prefer editing the section about the versions by myself, as there are too many errors to list them comfortably here.
 * is heavily influenced throughout the album → heavily influences the album
 * sheet music at → sheet music published by
 * each recording → each track

Release

 * "Love (Destiny)" It was → "Love (Destiny)" was released
 * tracks; the first two being the original recordings, whilst he latter two are instrumentals. → track, with the first two being the original recordings and the rest instrumentals.
 * Then on February → Subsequently, on February
 * set comma after "previous album track".
 * The CD single was marked with a special colored, this being brown. → This is overfluous and can be easily seen in the infobox, thus no need to write this out

Reception

 * A reviewer at Amazon.com → A reviewer at Amazon
 * whom praised → and praised
 * was a success → experienced success
 * week of sales → week of availability
 * it then went → The recording then went
 * in that chart → on that chart
 * making it Hamasaki's longest charting single → marking the singer's longest-charting release
 * they both → both tracks
 * longest spanning → longest-spanning
 * By the end of 1999, it → By the end of 1999, "Love (Destiny)"
 * chart; the single was ranked behind two of Hamasaki's other releases, "Boys & Girls" and her EP A, and was the ninth highest selling single by a female artist → chart behind two fellow releases of the singer, "Boy & Girls" (RELEASE DATE) and her extended play A (RElEASE DATE).
 * Likewise, it ranked → Likewise, it charted
 * 12 highest selling single → 12th highest-selling song
 * data base → database
 * CD's → CDs
 * for 4 weeks on the top → four weeks within the top
 * However, the single reached number 100 on TBS Count Down TV chart on May 14, 2001, her lowest entry on that chart to date.[23] → you should mention this earlier in this section

Music video and promotion

 * single version → remove "version"
 * As usual, I prefer editing the synopsis before passing this article.
 * It was used → It was additionally
 * the Japanese television → remove "the"
 * Remove "this being her"
 * A remix by → A remix produced by
 * on two of Hamasaki's greatest hits album → plural please
 * Remove "that being" here as well
 * The song has been included → "Love (Destiny)" has further been included

Certifications and sales

 * N/A → None
 * Remove full stops

Release history

 * Use scope="row" for countries
 * Unlink formats and labels as usual

Outcome

 * I've put this for 7 days to allow edits. Don't forget to ping me when you're ready or have a question. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:07, 3 October 2016 (UTC)
 * All complete CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk &middot;&#32;contribs} 03:56, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:14, 13 October 2016 (UTC)