Talk:Love Honor Cherish

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My Personal Evaluation of the Article
The article is structured well and no information seems out of place or distracting from the topic. The article stays neutral throughout and in doing so, shows no bias for one side over the other. Great Job on that! However, I think that it may be useful to implement more information and minor changes to certain Sections of the article. Here are some of my suggestions:

Significant Activities Before November 4, 2008

Could add more information on how the, newly created, organization focused its outreach on "the truth about marriage and developing a new generation of leadership on this issue" by possibly finding an example of their early outreach tactics. Could also implement a source that shows their focus in action, doing so will show credibility behind the statement of what their focus was/is.

I believe that there should be a source attached to "Heroes & History Makers Gala" and its amount raised for LHC if available.

Approach to Gathering Signatures

If available, more information on "Sign for Equality" should be noted. Creation date, total signatures gathered through the site, etc. This will paint a better picture of this tactic and provide information that will give the reader a better understanding of what was happening then.

Was there any other methods that LHC used to gather signatures or was it just through the webpage? If it was only through the webpage, I think that should be noted. If other methods were used, they should also be noted in order to make this segment of information more complete.

External links

Love Honor Webpage link seems to be dead. Does not lead anywhere.

References

Reference 1 is a Dead Link

Reference 3 does not lead to the information that it is citing.

Reference 4 has moved webpages... Broken Link

Reference 5 is outdated and needs to be updated: also leads to the LA Times homepage rather than an article that cites the information provided.

Thanks for reading, Crmitche95 (talk) 22:50, 24 January 2020 (UTC)