Talk:Love Lockdown/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Lirim.Z (talk · contribs) 08:05, 4 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Reviewing this soon.-- Lirim  |  Talk  08:05, 4 November 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Mention that it was shared on his blog
 * ✅ --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Abbreviate US or don't abbreviate UK; looks weird only doing one
 * ❌ since I have already stated "the United Kingdom" earlier in the lead, but not "the United States" because there was no point to mention the country before --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Is the cover for the digital edition or CD or vinyl? use |caption=
 * ✅ does this text look fine? --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Infobox looks great; proper fair use rationale given
 * Thank you, that is amazing to hear!!! --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)

Background and release

 * You don't need to mention that he plays keyboard twice in the same sentence; the sentence can end after
 * Would you be able to cite each sentence/qoute with ref names; main issue is that the reader (if he cares about the source) needs to check three sources even if he only cares about one quote etc.
 * ✅ for the above --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics

 * Why does File:Love Lockdown.ogg include information for "Paranoid"?
 * Must have been a glitch since other songs from 808s & Heartbreak seem to say this too; I have fixed this summary now though --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)


 * thats basically a quote from the article; lyrics described or quatation marks
 * ✅ --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)

Release, Critical reception, music video

 * No issues

Commercial performance

 * units are not sales
 * ✅ does this look fine? --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)


 * For how many consecutive weeks was it in the top 40?
 * ✅ but does it make sense to count the week it reached number 39 as one of the consecutive weeks in this prose? --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)


 * You don't need to say Finland twice
 * ✅ --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)

Live performances, Other versions, track listing, credits and personnel

 * No issues

Other

 * Copy Violation low - I see no issue

Outcome

 * Sorry that the review took so long. Some minor issues here and there, but generally a great article. 7 Days should be enough.-- Lirim  |  Talk  03:42, 8 November 2020 (UTC)
 * I have replied to everything above, you can place the article on hold via the talk page by the way. --K. Peake 13:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)
 * I am passing this article. Another great article about ye! Lirim  |  Talk  06:26, 14 November 2020 (UTC)


 * Thank you, but you have forgotten to update the status on appropriate pages so I will do that for you, which is not classified reviewing my own article due to only passing it on the other pages after you have done so in the review. --K. Peake 06:50, 15 November 2020 (UTC)