Talk:Love Machine (Girls Aloud song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:30, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * General
 * 1 Dab Link
 * 1 link has a connection issue and doesn't work


 * Info box
 * The info box has a bit of a cluttered feel. I think because there is an alternate cover, you should move the audio file to the Composition section (with a description) and move the music video link to it's own section at the bottom of the article like on "Trouble". It will make it look a lot better.
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Add a length duration template, like on "Glassheart"
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "The backing track was inspired by The Smiths, and created by Powell and Coler." → Not sure what you mean by backing track here?
 * "with elements of the 1980 synthpop songs." → I'd say "with elements of 80s synthpop" because the "songs" but makes it sound like it has sampled 80s songs.
 * - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Link music critics
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "debuted and peaked at number 2 on the Official Charts Company in the United Kingdom" → debuted and peaked at number 2 on the UK Singles Chart
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * ", while charting in Netherlands in 2005." → I'd just remove this
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Link music video
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * "in all of their" → on all of their
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Chart performance
 * "debuted and peaked at number 2 on the Official Charts Company in the United Kingdom" → debuted and peaked at number 2 on the UK Singles Chart
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Music video
 * Could this be expanded more?
 * Now see, I had a huge problem with this section, because I couldn't find that many info on the music video. I searched tons of websites for reviews, I went on Google Books to see if I could find any info on it also and nothing. The only link with major info about it is that one, and everything is really technical, like this bit: "The music video was onlined by Joe Billington at Rushes with Dom Aarons completed the final color grading there. Triangle Online handled the final online. According to Gosling, the online included a 10-hour Flame session where Flame artist Mark Beardal created opening and ending title sequences. During the online, Beardall also performed additional color correction, added CGI lens flare and starbursts, and provided general cosmetic clean up." So I'm not sure what I can do about this... - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * Organise this into year by year for performances. It's disjointed reading about 2012 at the start and 2009 at the end.
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Credits and personnel
 * Add a reference.
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * Charts
 * Two separate tables, one for 2004 and one for 2005.
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Mark them up for access so that the Chart column has the shaded bit of grey like on "Glassheart" for example.
 * ✅ - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)


 * References
 * Check for linking. FN1 for example doesn't have the work or publisher linked.
 * Take a look and see if everything is fine. - Saulo  Talk to Me 17:33, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
 * Passing. AARON &bull; TALK   22:28, 1 January 2013 (UTC)