Talk:Love On Top/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Basilisk4u (talk · contribs) 18:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Hi! I love this song, so I will review the article. Yay! Basilisk4u (talk) 18:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "Inspired from her state of mind while playing Etta James..." Playing Etta James in what?  Make sure you mention it was in Cadillac Records.
 * "Love on Top"'s musical composition, as well as Knowles' vocals and versatility, surprised critics." Surprise critics in a positive or negative way?


 * Background and development
 * Make sure you mention that she played James in Cadillac Records before the quote, so there is background about it.


 * Composition
 * Looks great! No complaints.


 * Critical reception
 * "Genevieve Koski of The A.V. Club viewed "Love on Top" as an exception on the album" An exception to what?  Or does she mean an exceptional song?
 * "Matthew Perpetua of Rolling Stone named "Love on Top" a blast" Put "a blast" in quotes


 * Chart performance
 * Very nice. Quite comprehensive!

On hold
The rest of the article looks great. I am putting the review on hold now in order for these small concerns to be addressed. Take care, Basilisk4u (talk) 17:27, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
 * All ✅. My love is love (talk) 18:09, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your fast response! Passing the article :)  Basilisk4u (talk) 18:16, 27 June 2012 (UTC)