Talk:Love Power (Disenchanted song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:43, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

I will start this today! --K. Peake 07:43, 5 August 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good!
 * Add a comma after fantasy film
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * ""Love Power" is a" → "It is a"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * The strength should not be referred to as "proposed" per the body
 * Done. Removed "proposed".--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Swap the recorded and composed sentences for the correct order
 * I feel that the current order is more appropriate, because typically a song is composed before it is recorded; it also matches the order in which the topics are discussed in the body of the article. It first gives context as to why Menzel didn't sing in the first film and Disney's plans to have her sing in Disenchanted, then Menken's writing of "Love Power", finally followed by the circumstances under which Menzel recorded it.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Menken composed "Love Power" with" → "Menken composed the song with"
 * Because of the previous comment, I've left "Love Power" as-is here, and instead changed "the singer recorded "Love Power" in her home" to "the singer recorded it in her home".--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * The third paragraph is too short; add the last two sentences of the second para to it to fix this
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "briefly reprises "Love Power"" → "briefly reprises the song"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Many reviewers also compared "Love Power"" → "Many reviewers also compared it"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:25, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Background and release

 * Img looks good!
 * First para is fine
 * "Although Menken claims he" → "Although Menken stated he" per WP:CLAIM
 * Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:33, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "in the closest of" → "in the closet of"
 * Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:33, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Pipe pop to Pop music
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:33, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Pipe mixed to Audio mixing (recorded music)
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 02:33, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Use in Disenchanted

 * "inadvertently turns herself into" → "inadvertently turns her into"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 03:21, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Nancy encourages Morgan to" → "Morgan is encouraged by her to" or something similar to avoid repetition of Nancy
 * Revised.--Changedforbetter (talk) 03:21, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "eleventh-hour song," → "11th-hour song," per MOS:NUM
 * Revised.--Changedforbetter (talk) 03:21, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "towards the end of the film." → "towards its ending."
 * Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 03:21, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Why is a capella spelt differently here from the lead?
 * Corrected spelling.--Changedforbetter (talk) 03:21, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * The "for several weeks" part is not sourced, so reword to representing them having lived in isolation really
 * Removed "several weeks"; replaced with "due to lockdown measures".--Changedforbetter (talk) 03:21, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

 * Pipe Broadway musicals to Broadway theatre
 * Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:42, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Pipe Walt Disney Music Publishing to Disney Music Group
 * Fixd.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:42, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "with Blacke Taylor of Looper describing" → "with Taylor describing"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:42, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Introduce the Collider writer by name
 * Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:42, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Remove "in the world" at the end, as that part is not sourced
 * Removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:42, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "that's true love"." → "that's true love."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences and add "Menzel said," at the start for attribution
 * Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:42, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Digital Spy should not be italicised
 * fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:42, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Remove the reintroduction to "Let it Go" at the combined part since this has already been done in this section
 * Understood, fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 17:42, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

Reception

 * "received mixed reviews" → "was met with mixed reviews"
 * Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:14, 10 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Too many refs are jumbled together; merge these using a note to avoid this
 * Compiled into list of references. --Changedforbetter (talk) 16:54, 11 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Writing for RogerEbert.com, Marya E. Gates" → "For RogerEbert.com, Marya E. Gates"
 * Fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 19:12, 11 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Are you sure The Northern Star, The Rice Thresher and The Spectator are not violations of WP:RSSM?
 * I would not consider them violations as they are subjective reviews and not stating facts.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:15, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Img looks good!
 * If The Rice Thresher is kept justifiably, move the ref to being after that mention in the sentence instead unless you add them all as a note
 * Moved to the first reference in that sentence. --Changedforbetter (talk) 20:23, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Remove or replace Forbes per WP:FORBES
 * Removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:27, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Where is the repetitive part sourced for Mashable?
 * The writer of the article complains that "the song they've given her here is underwhelming and forces her to belt the phrase 'love power' over and over, which makes less sense the more you hear it."--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:27, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Italicise Den of Geek
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:28, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "while Moviefone said it fails" → "while the staff of Moviefone said the song fails"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:28, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Remove or replace New York Post per WP:RSP
 * Removed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:28, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Benjamin Lee of The Guardian dismissed" → "Lee of The Guardian dismissed"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:31, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Kayla Laguerre-Lewis of Screen Rant praised" → "Laguerre-Lewis of Screen Rant praised"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:31, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Blake Taylor of Looper ranked" → "Taylor of Looper ranked"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:31, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * "Douglas Laman of Collider ranked" → "Laman of Collider ranked"
 * Done.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:31, 14 August 2023 (UTC)

Track listing

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Use so there is the right space between credits and personnel
 * fixed.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:34, 14 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Why are Engineer and Artist capitalised on one occasion each?
 * was copied from the source. Fixed now. --Changedforbetter (talk) 20:51, 14 August 2023 (UTC)

Release history

 * Format → Format(s)
 * corrected.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:10, 16 August 2023 (UTC)


 * The refs only back up a US release, not a various one
 * corrected.--Changedforbetter (talk) 20:10, 16 August 2023 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; took two days for this one! --K. Peake 16:58, 6 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your quick and detailed review. I begin addressing and responding to all points as soon as possible; please note that I may require a little longer than the typical 7 days to complete the responses (approximately three weeks at most).
 * Thank you for your patience in the meantime. Changedforbetter (talk) 16:07, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
 * K. Peake Thank you for your patience. I've completed my revisions and responded to all points. Looking forward to further comments and/or verdict. Changedforbetter (talk) 05:39, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Hello, the only thing left to do is compile a list of refs for the stronger inclusion part, maybe with The Rice Thresher separate though. K. Peake 20:49, 22 August 2023 (UTC)
 * @Kyle Peake Okay, this has been done. Awaiting final verdict. Changedforbetter (talk) 05:17, 23 August 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, this looks totally clean fab job! --K. Peake 18:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)