Talk:Love Story (video game)/GA1

GA Reassessment
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the reassessment.'' As part of WikiProject Good articles' Project quality task force, all old good articles are being re-reviewed to ensure that they meet current good article criteria (as detailed at WP:WIAFA. In reviewing this article, I have found that it doesn't meet criteria. Since the issues are fairly localized and could be more easily addressed than larger issues of construction, I putting this article on hold for seven days, longer if good efforts are made towards finding sourcing. Please appraise me on my talk page or here of any developments. Thanks, Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk  ) 19:15, 14 October 2009 (UTC)
 * The main issue is one of comprehensiveness; as this is a Japanese game, released in Japan, we need some reception from Japanese critics in order for the article to have a broad enough coverage of the topic. Two North American video game critic's opinions just do not cut it in this context.
 * There were other issues, but for the most part the prose is good and I removed excessive fair use images.
 * I found a Dengeki review of a similar title, the FEAR. The reviewer discusses this game in one paragraph and makes some hard to follow comments about the game, like calling it revolutionary in one sentence and then regrettable the next. Maybe someone more fluent in Japanese can get more out of it. Aside from a few TGS announces, I didn't come across anything else.
 * Something else that seems to be missing in the article is that the plot is not discussed outside of the lead. (Guyinblack25 talk 20:42, 19 October 2009 (UTC))
 * Good catch... I was going to mention it if the other issues got addressed :P Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 20:53, 19 October 2009 (UTC)

As there hasn't been action on the above issues, I am delisting as it stands. Remember that you can renominate at WP:GAN at any time, but I would strongly recommend adding more local and English reviews. Direct any further comments to my talk page; I don't watchlist old reviews. Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs ( talk ) 18:50, 22 October 2009 (UTC)