Talk:Love in This Club/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   21:04, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * Nice

Background

 * despite his marriage to stylist Tameka Foster in July 2007 -> women wouldn't like his music because he's married?
 * Well, he had become less popular since his marriage. Reworded a bit. Adabow (talk · contribs) 21:59, 8 December 2010 (UTC)

Composition

 * Fraser McAlpine of BBC Radio 1 says -> said, wrote

Release and critical reception

 * Nice

Chart performance

 * on the Billboard Hot 100 on the issue dated March 1, 2008 at number eighty-three -> reads better, "debuted at number eighty-three on the "

Music Video

 * Is there a better photo? The description says they are "dancing intimately" but the photo only shows their faces. Not a big deal if you can't.
 * Removed. It's not really that important and probably fails WP:NFCC. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:02, 8 December 2010 (UTC)


 * where he gave the song. -> sang, performed

Covers
Are there sources for these?


 * Overall there were almost no errors, good job! Once their fixed I'll gladly pass it :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   21:40, 8 December 2010 (UTC)


 * Passed :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   23:41, 8 December 2010 (UTC)