Talk:Love in This Club Part II/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:14, 30 November 2010 (UTC)


 * Plies doesn't have a page. ✅

Lead

 * Airplay is not a format, remove from the infobox. ✅
 * In the first sentence, it should be noted that Beyoncé and Wayne are only featured vocalists on the song. See "Telephone (song)" and "Me Against the Music". ✅
 * The second sentence should be switched with the third, since it's much more important to note the single release. ✅
 * Remove "Usher's label". ✅
 * "Follow up song" -> Sequel, answer song ✅
 * "Number one lead single" seems a little biased, remove "Number one". ✅
 * Information about the actual recording goes before the composition, including the mention of the sample. I'd suggest you expand the lead section a little bit on Usher's comment of the 'shock factor' or his praise of Beyoncé and Wayne. ✅
 * Change "the Billboard Hot 100 in the United States" -> "U.S. Billboard Hot 100". ✅
 * Add (RIAA) after Recording Industry Association of America. ✅

Background

 * The sample mention should definitely be moved to the composition section, and the writers removed.
 * Why should I remove the writers? Aren't they a key part of the background? Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:35, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
 * The writers of the sample aren't key to this song. Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:43, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
 * OK, done. Adabow (talk · contribs) 05:48, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Again, you don't have to remove the writers of Love In This Club Part II, only the writers of You Are Everything are irrelevant. Xwomanizerx (talk) 19:20, 30 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Oh, I see, that makes a lot more sense :) Adabow (talk · contribs) 19:46, 30 November 2010 (UTC)

Composition

 * Add (2002) after "Ignition". ✅

Release and critical reception

 * The release paragraph looks messy, and you should consider moving it to the Background section and let this be a Critical reception section. ✅
 * Add (2007) after "Crying Out for Me". ✅

The other sections look good. Nice work overall! Xwomanizerx (talk) 05:14, 30 November 2010 (UTC)