Talk:Love the Way You Lie (Part II)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 02:24, 12 July 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:


 * Infobox
 * Add song artwork to this article
 * There isn't one. It wasn't released as a single. Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9  11:40, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "It features guest vocals from rapper Eminem." - State nationality of Eminem
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * "It serves as the sequel to the 2010 worldwide hit single "Love the Way You Lie" - Put commas around "Love the Way You Lie"
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Background and composition
 * "...but with Rihanna as the lead vocalist, viewing things from the female perspective. - Change second part of sentence to flow better
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9  22:24, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Add an audio sample of the song, which according to WP:SAMPLE needs to be less than 10% of the original recording and about 64kbps in quality
 * ❌ I don't know how to add audio samples Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9  22:24, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * "...Loud works the pop gizmos..." - Italicize "Loud"
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * "It’s sick that all these battles are what keeps me satisfied,” she sings." - Put single quote around the lyrics
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9  22:24, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * "Chris Richards of Washington Post..." - Make it "The Washington Post"
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Live performances
 * "...singing an acappella version of "Love The Way You Lie Part II"." - Put "Part II" around brackets
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Credits and personnel
 * No issues


 * Charts
 * "...edition of the album, however..." - Make separate sentences
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9  22:24, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * References
 * Reference 1 - The publisher should be AOL Inc.; you should only include the "work=" parameter when a work needs to be italicized (magazines and other written works are italicized only)
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 2 - The publisher is "Mention"; work is "Toronto Sun", not "MTV"
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 3 - The publisher is MTV Networks; "work=" parameter not needed in this source because it is not written work
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 4 & 5 - Publisher is Sony/ATV Music Publishing; where is year 2010?
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 6 - Publisher needs to be wiki-linked
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 9 - "work=" parameter not needed
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 12 - "work=" parameter not needed
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 14 - Publisher is needed
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 17 - Publisher is needed
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 18 - Billboard is a magazine, so it should be italicized; publisher needed; fix date format to "yyyy-mm-dd"
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 19 - Work and publisher parameters are needed
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference 20 - Not sure if it is a reliable source
 * ✅ Removed. Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9  22:26, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Organize references better (Ex: where it has "Reflist", make it "Reflist|2")
 * . VítoR™  get LOUD! 20:18, 13 July 2011 (UTC)

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are a few issues keeping this article from good article status. First of all, there are numerous minor issues which I listed below that are affecting the quality of the article. Also, many of the references aren't properly formatted. I will give you the general seven days to fix the mistakes and/or debate the ones you do not believe affect GA status. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 05:25, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * OVERALL REVIEW

Oh, it looks like someone has gone through and made the changes that I was going to do..... Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9 21:45, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * I thought that all editors could participate on GA corrections. No one takes away your merit. But still there are errors to fix. VítoR™  get LOUD! 22:11, 13 July 2011 (UTC)


 * All comments have been addressed Rp0211. Is there is anything else that concerns you that I can amend? Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9  22:29, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Since all of the issues have been addressed, I have decided to put this article in good article status at this time. I will work on uploading a music file for this article to add clarity. Congratulations and keep up the good work. - Rp0211  ( talk2me ) 23:20, 13 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks :) Calvin  &bull; 9 9 9  11:49, 14 July 2011 (UTC)