Talk:Loverboy (Mariah Carey song)/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 01:55, 27 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Comments from AJona1992
 * Infobox: "Release" needs a start date template
 * Infobox: "Length" needs a duration template
 * There's too many sentences with "the song" - needs a variety
 * Why does "Following the release of "Loverboy"," is the first sentence of "Background and release"? Shouldn't it be who wrote it? who produced it? who mixed it? etc
 * Also there's nothing in "Background and release" about the singles' release. Maybe considering on renaming this section would be suitable as it is largely based on Carey's hospitalization and criticism that followed.
 * In "Composition" why is "Hook" capitalized?
 * "Loverboy" is reminiscent of several of Carey ---> "Loverboy" is reminiscent of several of Carey's
 * The Hartford Courant is a newspaper, so why isn't it in italics?
 * Lead single (is wikilinked three times), Billboard (is wikilinked twice), NME (is wikilinked three times), Shawnna (is wikilinked twice), The Guardian (is wikilinked twice) and Britney Spears (is wikilinked twice)
 * File:Loverboy (Feat. Cameo).ogg needs a "further rational" section. Look at File:Amor Prohibido.ogg as an example
 * ""Loverboy" was me with generally mixed reviews from music critics;" - maybe this was left over when someone had vandalized the article.
 * "in most major countries" - what is considered a "major country"?
 * Per WP:ORDINAL (numbers greater than nine are commonly rendered in numerals) "On July 29, 2001, "Loverboy" debuted at number sixty-five" would need to be "On July 29, 2001, "Loverboy" debuted at number 65". Also with the next sentence and all others in this section.
 * Please fix these before I do a spot check and reference checking. Happy holidays, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  01:55, 27 December 2011 (UTC)


 * Fixed all issues since Nathan is on vacation. You can continue with the review - Saulo  Talk to Me 21:33, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Can you please fix the lead, the three paragraphs now have "Loverboy" - needs a variety (Try variations like: The track, The single, The recording, It)

Please fix all of these, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  22:10, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Reference checking
 * FN#19's title needs to be "Raidió Teilifís Éireann > Music Review > Mariah Carey - Glitter"
 * FN#20 wikilink Erlewine, Stephen Thomas
 * FN#25's title needs to be "RIAA > Certifications > Mariah Carey"
 * FN#38 be consistent in weather or not you wikilink Tribune Company (compare with FN#11)
 * FN#56 is the publisher Nielsen Business Media, Inc? or is it Prometheus Global media on FN#55? (If you take FN#55, which should be the publisher, make sure that media is capitalize to Media)
 * Done it all! :) - Saulo  Talk to Me 01:42, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Congrats! The article passes. Best and happy holidays, Jona yo!  Selena 4 ever  03:10, 28 December 2011 (UTC)