Talk:Low-density lipoprotein receptor-related protein 8/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sahara4u (talk · contribs) 22:37, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

Lede

 * Not keen having a sinle sentence paragraph, this should be merged with the next one, and also one sentence don't need too many references.
 * "Through its interactions with one of its ligands,...." can you remove one "its"?
 * Link ligands.

Structure

 * "....domain of 8 ligand binding regions, an EGF-like domain containing 3 cysteine-rich...." → eight and three
 * What NPXY stands for?
 * "crosslinking" → "cross-linking"

When I added the information of NPXY, it makes it apear on the article as a separate paragraph but in the edits the sentence is right after the mentioning of NPXY. I do not know why it is formatting in this manner but I thought you should know. Do you have any suggestions on how to fix this matter? Thank you so much for the review. Neal.shah.bc (talk) 20:55, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

Function
"...with the phosphorylation of Dab1. Dab1 ..." What is Dab1? and also the 2nd sentence shouldn't be started with Dab1, rephrase this.
 * 2 single sentence paras!
 * "Reelin acts extracellularly as a ligand binding to ApoER2 and VLDLR on migrating neurons." → "Reelin acts as an extracellular ligand binding to ApoER2 and VLDLR on migrating neurons."
 * "...Fyn and Src." What are these meant by? Don't use abbreviations.
 * Link to PSD-95.

In regards to the 2 singe sentence paragraphs, when I try to edit it the sentences appear as one paragraph (a short two sentence paragraph) but when I look at the article it appears as two separate paragraphs because of the location of the picture. Thank you so much for the comments! It is truly appreciated. I am working diligently on fixing out mistakes to better our article.Neal.shah.bc (talk) 19:50, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

Also, for Fyn and Src. Those are not abbreviations but enzymes. I simply linked them to their appropriate page on wikipedia. Will that suffice?Neal.shah.bc (talk) 20:04, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

Other interacting proteins

 * "...to the testis and brain and binds to ApoER2 in these areas." → comma after brain
 * For consistency use either "testis" or "testes".
 * "...and migration of neurons, and it causes the..." → No need of "it".
 * 2 consecutive sentences start with FE65".

Clinical significance

 * "....CNS, producing neurofibrillary tangles..." Central nervous system (CNS), also links to CNS and neurofibrillary tangles.
 * Link to "fetal" and "symptoms". In fact, you should link all the medical terms at first usage because many of our readers are not familiar to these.

Images & Categories

 * All the images need alt text
 * Categories should be in alphabetical order, and more categories?

Good work with the article, I'll take another look once the above concerns resolve. Zia Khan 06:10, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

Final review

 * GA review (see Good article criteria and WP:GACN)


 * 1) Well written.
 * a (clear and concise prose which doesn't violate copyright laws, grammar and spelling are correct): b ''(MoS for lead, layout, word choice, and fiction:
 * 1) Factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (well-referenced): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (No original research):
 * 1) Broad in its coverage.
 * a (covers major aspects): b (well-focused):
 * 1) Neutral .
 * Fair representation, no bias:
 * 1) Stable.
 * No edit wars nor disputed contents:
 * 1) Illustrated appropriately by images.
 * a b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Result: No more issues, I guess. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 13:24, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Illustrated appropriately by images.
 * a b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Result: No more issues, I guess. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 13:24, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Result: No more issues, I guess. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 13:24, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
 * Pass/Fail: