Talk:Low-frequency electromagnetic compatibility

Revision comments Abduselam Hamid
thank you for the interesting article.

I go through the article and found some minor things which needs your attention.

please look at the Causes title. the paragraph inside this sub title needs revision. I included some corrections. There are also common wiki words which we can put their links,like current,voltage,frequency,telecommunication.. Abduselam Hamid (talk) 13:03, 1 July 2022 (UTC)


 * Thank you! NucaIurie (talk) 13:23, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

Article review [GLAM@PoliMi2022]
The article is well done and understandable, even though I'm not an expert in that topic.

I took the liberty of correcting minor issues (leftover white spaces before references, etc.)

I have a couple of suggestions for further improving the article: 1) I would rename the sections "Cause" and "Effect" to be more explicative, like "Causes of low frequency electromagnetic interference". Before reading the content, one would imply that "Causes" refer to "Causes of low frequency electromagnetic compatibility", which seems a bit strange. Do you think it's reasonable?

2) The first sentence in the "Effects" section "The ratio of harmonic weight to the fundamental frequency[...]" seems to pertain more in the "Causes" section rather than "Effects".

3) The sentence "There are a lot of challenges to be considered in this relatively new field. A series of studies have already been published, but the professional community still has not solved some very important challenges in the low frequency domain of EMC and PQ." does not seem very neutral or encyclopaedic. Maybe it's better to remove it and just leave the sentence that comes after?

Again, good job! NickDiCicco (talk) 14:32, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

Observations and suggestions for improvements
The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in June 2022.

- In the EMC community, there are some standards with the frequency range going down to 9 kHz. This information should be mentioned somewhere on the page. - I noticed several English typos and grammatical errors (such as "disturbes?"). It is better to review/double-check the English writing of the page.

--BarettoDiArchitettura (talk) 08:38, 21 July 2022 (UTC)