Talk:Lowland streaked tenrec

Terrible sentence
The section Physical appearance contains this sentence:

"However, the ventral region contains few to no quills but have the ability to detach in predation defense."

I hope someone knowledgeable about the subject and who knows how to write English sentences can fix this. 2601:200:C000:1A0:C016:D334:56A8:4CA5 (talk) 04:16, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Bad writing
One passage reads as follows:

"While the streaked tenrec does eat earthworms it seems to affect them. The way it affects them is by their teeth which there would be scratches and pits that are caused by dirt."

I hope someone knowledgeable about the subject can rewrite this so it becomes good writing. 2601:200:C000:1A0:C016:D334:56A8:4CA5 (talk) 16:48, 19 November 2021 (UTC)