Talk:Luapula Province/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MX (talk · contribs) 13:42, 31 July 2017 (UTC)

Review
Hi, I'll be happy to review this article. I took a look at the article and I think this is ripe for promotion. The layout, prose, and sources look great. My review usually consists of two parts. In my first part, I will review the article's prose and post any suggestions/mistakes that need to be addressed. In my second part, I will try to go through every source and make sure the information is attributed correctly. Thanks and look forward to reviewing this! MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 13:42, 31 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot - will try to address review comments as soon as possible.Ssriram mt (talk) 16:38, 31 July 2017 (UTC)

Part 1

 * – add (Congo DR) after Democratic Republic of Congo since you're using this format throughout the article.
 * - Copperbelt Province and capitalize the "p"
 * - capitalize "p" and link to Kenneth Kaunda
 * - link 1991 elections to Zambian general election, 1991
 * - Frederick Chiluba
 * - is "son of the soil" a direct quote/given title? If so, I would add the (").
 * - Lake Mweru
 * - remove link per WP:OVERLINK
 * - I don't understand this whole sentence. What kind of problems? Consider separating into separate sentences since it might be a run-on sentence.


 * Geography
 * - remove link per WP:OVERLINK
 * - since you're linking this lake in the first mention above, remove the link here.
 * - remove link per WP:OVERLINK
 * - remove link and use Congo DR, per above.


 * Demographics
 * - Would you be able to add the sq. mi conversion too? [i.e. 1.0 km2 (0.39 sq mi)]


 * Economy and utility services
 * - what does LCMS stand for? Please write what it means and add (LCMS) after it, similar to total fertility rate (TFR), which you did before.
 * - add acres too [i.e. 1.0 ha (2.5 acres)]
 * - Ditto.


 * Culture and tourism
 * - This is sentence needs a major revision. It runs without making a lot of sense. Consider introducing the falls, and then splitting accordingly.
 * - what is Lubalunda?

Part 2
I'll be reviewing the sources tomorrow. Thanks for taking care of most of the concerns above. MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 13:40, 4 August 2017 (UTC)
 * - Please fix these.


 * - Please rephrase this by going here
 * ✅ The site copied from here - modified it.


 * - I'm not able to pull up the numbers. Where do I have to click?
 * ✅Included a stable link.

Other than the issues above, everything else checks out. I'll be setting a close date of August 12 for these issues to be addressed. I'll be around every day if you need me. MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 17:14, 5 August 2017 (UTC)
 * - I haven't had much luck pulling the numbers/data for sources that direct to this database site. Would it be better to just use the original?
 * ✅ I have modified with Zambia stat page - please choose the stat parm (like agriculture).Ssriram mt (talk) 17:32, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

✅ I think the article is ready to be promoted. Nice job! MX ( ✉  •  ✎  ) 18:08, 9 August 2017 (UTC)