Talk:Lucienne's Quest/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 02:42, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

Looks good overall. Placing on hold until issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 02:42, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
 * I feel like the Gameplay image could use a slightly more detailed caption
 * Done
 * I'd specify what year Suikoden was released
 * Done
 * "Suikoden.[1] taking place" - you need to replace the period with a comma
 * Whoops, done
 * "again writing more positively, wrote" - using 'writing' and 'wrote' so closely together reads a little awkward. I'd change 'wrote' to 'said'
 * Done
 * Are you sure there aren't any other reviews of the Saturn port? Also at least one example of what made the port a 'catastrophe' would be of interest.
 * You are totally right, there is. I will get this added tomorrow...also pinging because he translated the review that said 'catastrophe'.
 * Reference 3 clarifies that it is in French, and reference 5 clarifies that it is in Japanese. Reference 6 also needs to specify the language. Looks like refs five and six need publishers also.
 * Fixed. The publisher/website names were there but written in JP so it was indiscernible. I changed to English.
 * Work in progress...I will ping when done. TarkusAB talk 07:41, 28 June 2018 (UTC)
 * No worries. I'd be happy to pass this once another Saturn review is added. I won't hold things up for the 'catastrophe' explanation but i'd still encourage you to add that later if you can. Freikorp (talk) 10:12, 28 June 2018 (UTC)
 * I think the catastrophe word is fine, I added the full quote + translation in the ref, and it's properly attributed (Joypad said ...) and not as a statement of fact (the game was...) which would have required multiple sources all calling it the same. Ben · Salvidrim!   &#9993;  15:29, 28 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks Ben. And I added a review from Sega Saturn Magazine  TarkusAB talk 03:54, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Happy to pass this now. Congrats. :) Freikorp (talk) 04:01, 29 June 2018 (UTC)