Talk:Lucius Neratius Marcellus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * Marcellus was elected consul twice, first under Domitian and later under Hadrian. suggest listing years of consulship; combine with beginning of second paragraph in lead.
 * Done.


 * Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall. suggest:
 * Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal from the Antonine Wall to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall.
 * Done.


 * he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless. suggest:
 * . He he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless.
 * The sentence doesn't make sense then.


 * The frontier was withdrawn to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation. suggest:
 * The frontier was withdrawn from the Antonine Wall to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation.
 * Done.


 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  16:07, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Hi. That was prompt as usual. Thanks. 3 out of 4 prose suggestions implemented. If you meant to pass this as a GA - I think that you did - then you forgot to alter the header. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:54, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Apologies, passed now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  22:18, 29 August 2018 (UTC)