Talk:Lucy Kaopaulu Peabody/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 00:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  00:46, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
 * 1
 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   : http://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1898-06-24/ed-1/seq-7/ and http://www.nhch.com/cms/View.aspx/Show/OurBenefactor-LucyKalanikumaikiekieHenriques are dead.
 * User:Iazyges. Fixed the link to https://chroniclingamerica.loc.gov/lccn/sn85047084/1898-06-24/ed-1/seq-7/. It just missing an s. Had to toss the second because it is no longer retrievable one and added alternative sources instead.


 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * she helped re-establish and became the second founder of the Kaʻahumanu Society, a female-led civic society chartered during the Hawaiian monarchy. suggest:
 * she founded the reestablished Kaʻahumanu Society, a female-led civic society chartered during the Hawaiian monarchy.
 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  10:30, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
 * Changed prose as suggested. KAVEBEAR (talk) 16:25, 23 July 2018 (UTC)