Talk:Ludwig Hirschfeld Mack

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Cheers.— InternetArchiveBot  (Report bug) 11:41, 8 January 2018 (UTC)

This page is looking a lot better than last time I did some work on it about a year ago, but it still has a lot of unsourced claims. Also, the References are an odd mixture of notes and references. I also found quite a lot of external links used in the body of the text. These should be inserted as inline references, if they are specificly relevant and support what is being claimed in text, otherwise they shouldn't be there at all. Aside comments shouldn't be inserted between ref tags - they are comments, not sources of information. If something is worth saying just put it in the text - if it isn't directly relevant, then leave it out. The subject of the page was an academic so when adding content it would be good to do him the honour of citing it correctly. Felixkrater (talk) 15:52, 23 January 2018 (UTC)