Talk:Ludwig Mond

Review comments
Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

Espresso Addict 18:32, 13 July 2007 (UTC)
 * Lead needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
 * Some appropriate headings present, but further organisation would be beneficial
 * Information on research should be expanded
 * Some references present, but some material unsourced
 * External links to useful online resources should be added if available