Talk:Luis Argudo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)

Will also review this article. MWright96 (talk) 15:19, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Perhaps explain briefly how he is eligible to play for Colombia or Ecuador?
 * ✅, now reads "he is also eligible to play for the Colombian or Ecuadorian national teams through his parental heritage."

Early life

 * Wikilink varisty soccer to Varisty team
 * ✅, changed to "He was a four-year varsity soccer player for the Patriots,".


 * Wikilink assist to Assist (football)


 * "He also played in the NYC Futsal League." - this sentence needs to be cited to a reliable source
 * ✅, changed to "He also played for New York Ecuador in the NYC Futsal League." and added a reference.


 * "Argudo committed to play collegiately at Elon," - committed to play college soccer
 * ✅, changed to "Argudo committed to play college soccer at Elon,".

College and amateur

 * "he provided two assists on the year" - during
 * ✅, changed to "he provided two assists during the season".


 * "Argudo put forth his best collegiate season:" - had


 * "He scored five times in the first four games of the season," - in the season's first four games,


 * "helping his team defeat Coastal Carolina by a 2–0 scoreline." - defeat Coastal Carolina 2–0.


 * Wikilink penalty shootout to Penalty shoot-out (association football)


 * "Argudo was named Third Team All-Atlantic Coast Conference following the season;" - Argudo was named to the
 * ✅, changed to "Argudo was named to the All-Atlantic Coast Conference Third Team following the season;".


 * "he concluded his two seasons at Wake Forest with nine goals in 48 appearances." - again, this sentence is uncited and must be sourced to a reliable citation
 * ✅, referenced to his Wake Forest profile.

Carolina Dynamo

 * "Argudo finished with two goals from 10 appearances in his lone season with Carolina." - needs a reliable citation to back up the statement
 * ✅, referenced to his PDL profile.

Columbus Crew SC

 * "After taking part in preseason," - what preseason event?
 * ✅, changed to "After taking part in the team's preseason camp, he officially signed with Columbus on March 1."

Personal life

 * Wikilink Colombia and Ecuador to the Colombia national football team and the Ecuador national football team, respectively, in the third sentence of this section

Nice effort put into the article so far. Will put this review on hold for the standard seven days. MWright96 (talk) 19:57, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
 * I believe I've addressed all of the concerns, the only outstanding issue that could pop up would be the point in the lede. Let me know if that could still be tinkered with, otherwise thanks for the review! 21.colinthompson (talk) 19:25, 25 February 2019 (UTC)
 * No, there is no further tinkering with the query of the lede that needs to be undertaken. The article can now be promoted to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 20:57, 25 February 2019 (UTC)