Talk:Luka Šamanić/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kosack (talk · contribs) 08:40, 25 September 2018 (UTC)

I'll have a look at this one, will post review as soon as possible. Kosack (talk) 08:40, 25 September 2018 (UTC)

Initial review

Lead

 * WP:NBAHEIGHT would suggest that listing a player's height and weight in the lead should be avoided unless particularly unusual, which he doesn't appear to be.

Early life

 * Unlink Belgium, Slovenia and Germany. Per WP:OVERLINK, countries should generally not be linked unless they have significant relevance to the article.
 * 9 months > nine months, per MOS:NUMERAL.

Youth career

 * "to help trounce", trounce seems a somewhat journalistic wording and comes across as a WP:PEACOCK word. Help defeat would be more formal.
 * What's the HSC part of HSC Virtus Roma? I can't find that in their article.
 * Bit of an issue with date formats in this section, jumping from dd-mm-yyyy to mm-dd-yyyy. As a European player dd-mm-yyyy would be the preferred format.
 * Unlink EuroLeague, already linked in previous section.
 * "at EuroLeague FanZone", should that be "at the EuroLeague FanZone?
 * Barcelona are referred to as FC Barcelona and simply Barcelona in the first half of the last paragraph. Stick to one for consistency.

FC Barcelona B (2017–2018)

 * Unlink FC Barcelona, linked previously in the article.
 * "he 11 points in 19 minutes against Araberri.", there's a word missing in this sentence.

Personal life

 * You linked and spelt out NBA here which is fine but it is mentioned previously in the article so really the link and abbreviation should be used in the first usage.
 * Unlink football, previously linked.

Nicely written and no major concerns. A few small issues to deal with, placed on hold for now. Kosack (talk) 11:42, 25 September 2018 (UTC)
 * All concerns have been cleared up. Runningibis (talk) 23:27, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
 * Nice work, a tidy article for a young player. Meets the relevant GA criteria, promoting. Kosack (talk) 12:27, 27 September 2018 (UTC)