Talk:Lung Cancer Alliance

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Wondering how I can ensure this page can a view from the editors to remove the warnings at the top of the article. Also working on it on my side, but help/edits are appreciated! --MeghanWelch (talk) 19:28, 17 September 2013 (UTC)


 * In its current form, the article appears to be a promotional brochure written by the organization. That's not right for an encyclopedia. Try for an objective tone. Try for content about the organization, not about lung cancer. Provide inline reference citations to substantiate the information in the article. To the extent possible, cite third-party reliable sources.


 * Some better (but still not perfect) examples of articles about organizations that may be helpful to you (as models) are Independent Women's Forum, Catholic Health Association of the United States, and Physicians Committee for Responsible Medicine. --Orlady (talk) 20:02, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

{help me} Still attempting to get the warnings removed from the top of this article, and hoping more objective editors can take a look at it and make edits as they see fit. I've attempted to implement some changes, but fear I may not be seeing all necessary changes.