Talk:Lurie Children's Hospital/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:20, 18 January 2021 (UTC)


 * I'll review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:20, 18 January 2021 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Pass
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Pass
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Since the lead is a summary of the article and refs should only be used for contentious subjects, can the 360 beds reference be moved to the body?
 * Please wikilink U.S.News & World Report

History

 * References 13 & 14 don't support sentence
 * Can some of these one-sentence lines be connected into a paragraph?
 * Wikilink Ray Kroc
 * In 2006, hospital administration had announced plans to build an entirely new children's hospital closer to downtown Chicago and closer to the campus of their academic affiliate, Northwestern University. needs a reference
 * Also, I suggest merging it with the 2008 sentence since it seems odd to jump from the 1980s to late 2000s
 * Please merge On June 9, 2012, the hospital moved from their old campus to its current location in Streeterville, in a coordinated move of 200 children that took over 10 hours with The hospital also changed its name to Ann & Robert H. Lurie Children's Hospital of Chicago & Ann Lurie stuff paragraph
 * reference 46 doesn't mention the Fire Department
 * Fix reference 61
 * Wikilink COVID-19 pandemic
 * May, December, and 2021 can be one paragraph

About

 * Remove the external link and Wikilink U.S.News & World Report instead

Ronald McDonald House

 * The history section can probably be one paragraph
 * Please Wikilink Black Lives Matter
 * Also, remove HealthLeaders as the author of reference 93