Talk:Lydia Hart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HorrorFan121 (talk) 02:30, 31 January 2011 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article. ;) I have found a few minor problems with the article.


 * Channel 5 links to a disambiguation page. This needs to be corrected. ✅
 * The article has two rotted links. These (#4)  (#24) need to be fixed. ✅

Lead
 * The lead should summarize the article as a whole. The reception of the character should be mentioned somewhere in there. ✅

Prose
 * I found no problems with the prose after reading the article. No grammar/spelling mistakes. ✅

Citations
 * The last sentence of the reception section should have a citation. ✅
 * No problem with reliability on the sources. ✅

Overall, a very interesting article. Once you fixed these issues I brought up it should be good. HorrorFan121 (talk) 02:30, 31 January 2011 (UTC)


 * I've fixed all the points mentioned. I expanded the lead to reflect the reception, there are now no disambiguation or dead links. RAIN*the*ONE  BAM 18:49, 31 January 2011 (UTC)


 * Great! The article can be listed now. Congrats on the hard work. ;) HorrorFan121 (talk) 20:18, 31 January 2011 (UTC)