Talk:Lynching of Robert Mulliner

Assigned Peer Review

Sara
Lead: I like this section, the word hanged should be changed to "hung" and the part about Mulliner being jailed should be mentioned before he was dragged out of the courthouse to incorporate some chronology in there, very well written though.

Background: I really like this section! You laid out the topic at hand very clearly and the info is relevant to the lynching itself.

Lynching So this section was very well framed. I think you just need to change Clarke to Clark, but you. had great chronology and it ws easy to understand what happened during the lynching.

Julia
Lead Section •	Very well written •	Good summary of the topic •	Short and right to the point Background •	I like how you broke up the background info into two sections •	Good amount of information •	There is some wording that makes it sound a little bias. For example, “This constant mistreatment”. I would maybe change the wording. Lynching •	Well written section •	Describes the event with enough detail •	Good references Aftermath •	I like how this section was broken up as there is a lot of information •	All info seems relevant to the topic •	Very thorough explanation Significance •	Nice way to end the article Overall: Overall, I think that this is a very well written wiki article. This article is easy to understand and contains a lot of very important information. If anything, I would look at some of the wording to make sure that it is as unbiased as possible.

Juldav2000 (talk) 21:11, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

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