Talk:Lynn Gilderdale

Changes to lead
The lead is meant to summarize the body in a short, meaningful way. It should not have excessive amounts of detail (how Gilderdale thinks she "caught" CFS is for instance, not necessary, as well as unnecessarily speculative since CFS hasn't been linked to any one cause) and should use the appropriate links and terminology (i.e. CFS should be linked, with a parenthetical comment that it's called ME in the UK). WLU (t) (c) Wikipedia's rules: simple/complex 11:33, 8 April 2011 (UTC)