Talk:Lynn H. Cohick

Proposed Changes to Lynn H Cohick page
Melcous - thank you for your note. Here are the changes I made (my apologies for not subscribing to COI stated guidelines; here are the changes for your and others' review):

Changed the second paragraph to read: Cohick taught New Testament at Wheaton College from 2000-2018,[1] sequentially serving as Vice-Chair of the Faulty, chairing the Bible and Theology Department,[4] and serving as interim dean of Humanities and Theological Studies, in her three last years at Wheaton College.[5] footnote 4 was kept, although it is inaccurate; footnote 5 (already in page) was added to this sentence.Jaclhc (talk) 16:33, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

Reason: the previous sentence stated Cohick was the Chair of Wheaton Center for Early Christian Studies is inaccurate, cited in the link.

Added additional sentence to third paragraph with citation: The DMin degree program "Women in Theology and Leadership" at Northern Seminary will commence in 2022.[8] footnote 8: "Northern Seminary | Doctor of Ministry". Northern Seminary. Retrieved 2022-02-20.

Added additional sentence to fourth paragraph with citation: In 2020, Cohick accepted the invitation to serve on the Board of Trustees of Biola University, located in La Mirada, CA.[11] footnote 11: "Lynn Cohick | People, Biola University". www.biola.edu. Retrieved 2022-02-20.

Jaclhc (talk) 16:33, 21 February 2022 (UTC) Note: copying content from my talk page here for transparency Melcous (talk) 21:11, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks . I have reviewed those changes and made a few tweaks to the wording to ensure it is written neutrally and verifiable according to what the sources actually say. If you have any further proposals now or in the future, you can use the Template:Request edit here on this talk page which will alert other editors to your suggestions. Melcous (talk) 21:18, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
 * Melcous, et al - The following are changes to propose for Lynn H Cohick wikipedia:
 * At the end of the first paragraph under the Education section, it currently states "needs citations" - I found two relevant ones to insert there:
 * https://www.ridley.edu.au/about-us/ridley-people/visiting-lecturers-and-tutors/ *and*
 * https://www.regent-college.edu/faculty/part-time-and-visiting/lynn-cohick
 * At the end of the third paragraph, Northern Seminary has begun two programs under Dr. Cohick's guidance; the last sentence should be modified and a citation inserted to read:
 * Cohick was involved in launching a new Master's degree program (April 2021) and a new DMin degree program (august 2022), both in Women's Studies at Northern Seminary.
 * The new citations to add are: https://www.seminary.edu/wtl/ *and* https://www.seminary.edu/programs/dmin/
 * I apologize for not using the Request Edit Template - I failed to use it in a way that represented the proposed changes with any ability to properly review> Jaclhc (talk) 21:58, 13 August 2022 (UTC)