Talk:Lyo and Merly/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 05:21, 22 November 2010 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:21, 22 November 2010 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * Reference #5 (amanda zhang) is a deadlink, as is the first external link.
 * "The company stated it wanted to developed a pair of mascots "who had contrasting yet complementary personalities". " this would need a cite right after since it's a quote, though i presume it's the same as paragraph's end
 * File:2010SummerYouthOlympics-Singapore-Merly-bus-20100427.jpg has both a copyright and free use tag; which is right? Remove whichever doesn't belong.
 * I was the editor who tagged the image. The photograph was released under a free licence by the photographer. However, it contains a copyrighted image of Merly. Therefore, in a sense both tags apply. — Cheers, Jack Lee  –talk– 09:12, 22 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Ah, I see, it's a derivative work. Didn't see that note originally. Just the ref issues remain then. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 17:12, 22 November 2010 (UTC)

I'll put the article on hold and pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:44, 22 November 2010 (UTC)

I'll keep it on hold until the end of the month due to sudden inactivity be the writer. If the changes aren't fixed though I'll have to fail it, which I'd rather not do. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:47, 26 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, I have to fail the article. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 21:08, 3 December 2010 (UTC)