Talk:M113 armoured personnel carriers in Australian service/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AustralianRupert (talk · contribs) 05:55, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

I will review this article shortly. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 05:55, 6 December 2019 (UTC)

Initial comments/suggestions: G'day, Nick, this is excellent work. I have a few minor suggestions: AustralianRupert (talk) 06:39, 6 December 2019 (UTC)


 * Either 817 or 840 M113s --> "Up to 840 M113s" or maybe "Between 817 and 840 M113s"?
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * in the lead, suggest linking the various conflicts/operations, e.g. Vietnam War, Somalia, Rwanda and East Timor
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * A project to replace the M113s is currently underway --> maybe include the expected year of this replacement?
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Each of the regiments was --> "Each regiment was"?
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Innesfail --> Innisfail
 * oops, fixed Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * All of Model 74C turrets had been --> "All of the Model 74C turrets had been..." or "All Model 74C turrets had been..."
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * maneuver support vehicles --> "manoeuvre"
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * placed during the 1963–64 --> "1963–1964"
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * a single 81mm mortar --> non breaking space between 81 and mm
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * suggest linking 2nd Cavalry Regiment
 * Done Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * the following terms appear to be overlinked: Department of Defence (Australia), infantry fighting vehicle, M101 howitzer (although this one is probably ok given it is a pipe), 1 RAR,
 * Fixed Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * in the Bibliography, is there an ISSN for the Australian Army Journal?
 * Added (for the pre-1968 iteration - as I understand it, the journal has been stopped and started again on several occasions and WorldCat has multiple records) Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * same as above (ISBN or OCLC) for the Baines work?
 * OCLC added. Oddly, it seems to lack an ISBN and no copy was provided to the National Library of Australia. Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * "M113 Upgrade Program" --> "M113 upgrade program"?
 * Lower case per the Australian National Audit Office's usage (it looks like the official name for the project was Project Land 106 ) Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks a lot for this review Nick-D (talk) 07:06, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
 * No worries, your changes look good. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 23:05, 7 December 2019 (UTC)

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Passing review now. Thanks for your efforts with this article, Nick. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 23:05, 7 December 2019 (UTC)