Talk:M5 half-track/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Btphelps (talk · contribs) 23:50, 13 November 2015 (UTC)

Beginning review on Friday, November 13. Will probably take up to 7 days to complete it. — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 23:50, 13 November 2015 (UTC)


 * The article does a good job of listing the several variants, which can be confusing. But there are several obvious typos that should have been resolved before the nomination was submitted.


 * There are a lot of instances of passive tense, confusing who is doing what to whom. It (the article!) also uses "it" a lot and the antecedent reference is often unclear.


 * Other articles on similar vehicles have flags alongside the countries operating the vehicles. It seems like a suitable use here as well.


 * Due to the various issues described in the review below I'm failing it for now. Please fix these and re-nominate the article. — btphelps (talk to me) (what I've done) 05:28, 16 November 2015 (UTC)