Talk:MAX Yellow Line/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kew Gardens 613 (talk · contribs) 13:16, 23 May 2019 (UTC)

Hello, thanks for your work on this article. I hope to have comments for you shortly.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 13:16, 23 May 2019 (UTC)


 * I will try to be as thorough as I can, so bear with me. Thanks for requesting my help. This is my second review of an article, so if there is anything I could do better, please tell me.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:21, 23 May 2019 (UTC)

Comments

 * Do either of you know why my comment is replaced by pending? Thanks.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:40, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 * When you make a comment in a template and you put an equals sign, sometimes it breaks. So you have to manually insert the number of the parameter, which in this case is 3 since it is the third parameter. epicgenius (talk) 17:07, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks so much. I knew nothing about that. I should be able to start doing real editing again now that school is done for me.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 17:09, 23 May 2019 (UTC)

Suggestions
These are not needed for the review, but would help it out.


 * Concerning Source 61, make sure to save them on the web archive. I saved this one. Older web pages like this are vulnerable to be taken down.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 14:50, 23 May 2019 (UTC)


 * An image of one of the merges with the other lines would be great.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 15:00, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 * These will be addressed later today as I need to get back to work! --Truflip99 (talk) 19:09, 23 May 2019 (UTC)

I believe I have addressed all of the issues you pointed out. Please let me know if there is any else. I can't thank you enough for the extremely thorough review work you put into this. Thank you!! --Truflip99 (talk) 19:09, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks for quickly revolving these issues. There are a few more things that need to be addressed. No problem on the thorough review. This is my second one, but I don't know how to do it any other way.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 22:05, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 * I think you did an amazing job! I thought I was pretty meticulous with this article, but you found issues that I didn't even think about. I'm truly grateful. Hopefully, I've addressed the other issues. --Truflip99 (talk) 23:36, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 * You have addressed the issues. Thanks. I look forward to seeing the changes on Max Blue Line. Stay well.--Kew Gardens 613 (talk) 02:06, 24 May 2019 (UTC)