Talk:MLS Cup 2019/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:31, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 14:31, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "for the 2020 CONCACAF Champions League and 2020 Campeones Cup." - and the
 * Fixed.

Road to the final

 * "The 2019 season was the 24th in MLS history," - This fact is not mentioned in the "MLS releases 2019 regular-season schedule" source from MLS. An alternative source is needed for this instance
 * Fixed.
 * "facing each team in the same conference twice and teams in the other conference once." - try not to use the same word twice in the same sentence
 * Fixed.

Seattle Sounders FC

 * The acroynms of Los Angeles FC should be mentioned in parentheses since its full name is not mentioned elsewhere
 * Fixed.
 * Designated Player should be wikilinked in this section and not in the Toronto FC sub-section
 * Fixed.

Toronto FC

 * "from Richie Laryea and Jonathan Osorio. Osorio added his second" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
 * The acroynms of New York City FC should be mentioned in parentheses since the club's full name is not mentioned anywhere else
 * Fixed.
 * "to equalize for Toronto; the Reds completed their 2–1 upset victory" - try not to use wording such as "The Reds"
 * Trying to avoid using Toronto too frequently, and "the Reds" is a common nickname for the team.

Venue and preparations

 * "including 3,000 allocated to away fans by Major League Soccer." - the text in bold should be written as MLS for consistency with using the league's acroynms after its full name's first mention
 * Fixed by using "the league" to emphasize that it came from the league's front office.
 * "Prices for tickets on secondary markets peaked at an average of $622," - is the prices of these tickets notable for any reason to merit inclusion?
 * The next part of the sentence explains its notability, as it surpassed almost every other mainstream events in Seattle.
 * "arriving via a state ferries" - As a British writer, I am not so sure whether this portion of text is gramatically correct in American English or whether there words missing from it
 * It was incorrect, and I have rewritten the sentence.

Broadcasting

 * "and worked alongside color analyst Taylor Twellman." - a MOS:SEAOFBLUE violation here
 * Removed the first link.
 * "The Univision boadcast averaged" - typo; should be spelt as broadcast
 * Fixed.

Summary

 * "but his shot was unable to beat goalkeeper" - go past
 * Fixed.

Post-match

 * "for the largest sporting event at the stadium and largest soccer attendance in state history." - repetition of the word "largest"
 * Fixed.
 * "the Sounders earned a berth in the 2020 CONCACAF Champions League, despite having already qualified as the highest-ranked regular season team without a berth." - repetition of the word "berth"
 * Fixed.

These are all the issues I found and will put the review on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 17:43, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have addressed all but two of your points.  Sounder Bruce  23:05, 29 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Am satisfied with the changes and will promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:42, 30 March 2020 (UTC)