Talk:M (James Bond)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 11:22, 31 January 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * ""once again under written, and brown is not allowed the opportunity to explore and reveal his character traits,[33] with the character being "too nice"." - is the sentence from once to traits a quote?
 * ""Christ, I miss the Cold War")." - why a bracket?
 * "is a out-dated relic" - an?
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Ref 6,10,12,16,17,20,23,29,50,51,53 don't point to any citation. Overall fine.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * All the above now completed. Cheers - SchroCat ( ^  •  @ ) 13:27, 3 February 2012 (UTC)
 * You forgot 50,51-- ♫GoP♫ T C N 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Sorry - now done! - SchroCat ( ^  •  @ ) 23:29, 4 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Some formatting issues
 * The quote box could do with aligning to either the left or right side, with the text wrapped around it.
 * The citation follows on directly from the preceeding text, so it has to follow and not have text wrapped around it. - SchroCat ( ^  •  @ ) 00:09, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I agree with Schrodinger. -- ♫GoP♫ T C N 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)


 * Where the films are listed there is a bit white space. I would put Bernard Lee's and Judi Dench's films/games into 2 columns to remove some of this white space.
 * Thanks - I'll have a think about the best way to get this to look good, as well as flow properly. - SchroCat ( ^  •  @ ) 00:09, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I agree with Mattg82. The white space is a bit distracting.-- ♫GoP♫ T C N 15:16, 4 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Mattg82 (talk) 23:53, 3 February 2012 (UTC)
 * All now sorted - I hope! Let me know if you would like any more changes undertaken. Cheers - SchroCat ( ^  •  @ ) 23:29, 4 February 2012 (UTC)