Talk:MacBook Pro/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 21:39, 23 January 2010 (UTC)

Comments
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Thanks for reviewing! I've got a few comments right off the bat. The criterion they relate to are bolded so you can see them better: Sorry about not providing details on why, I meant to, just somehow forgot. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:51, 3 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Erm... edit wars? Please tell me where. Airplaneman  talk 01:02, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Not edit wars (hence etc.), but reverts, you can see this in the article history. This is part of the GA Criteria. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:51, 3 February 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't understand what you want me to do with the article as it relates to MoS 17.1. May you please specify where? Thanks, Airplaneman  talk 01:05, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Section 3, the timeline. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:51, 3 February 2010 (UTC)
 * The model numbers are just the characters Apple uses to identify them, much like a barcode you would see at the store. They specify which build and model the computer is. Airplaneman  talk 01:06, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
 * What does /A mean? -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:51, 3 February 2010 (UTC)
 * BTW, I'm not sure that's prose, as it's in a chart... but that's just me being picky... Airplaneman  talk 01:10, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Couldn't find a better place to put it. :P -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:51, 3 February 2010 (UTC)
 * References –  Airplaneman  talk 01:10, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Unsourced PPs (notes for self):
 * MacBook_Pro
 * MacBook_Pro
 * MacBook_Pro
 * In what area do I need more coverage? Airplaneman  talk 01:16, 2 February 2010 (UTC)
 * Take a look at your other article, Mac Pro. Look at the difference in the table of contents, I think there could be more put into this article like the Mac Pro. -- &#47; MWOAP &#124; Notify Me &#92; 01:51, 3 February 2010 (UTC)