Talk:Mackensen-class battlecruiser/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria) (see here for this contributor's history of GA reviews)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written:
 * Not Yet
 * 1) The Armament section contains metric and non-metic comparisons for each number, while most of the rest of the article does not. For consistency sake, either all or none of the measurments should have meters/yards comparisons.
 * 2) The further reading section only has one book, so it should probably be merged with references, expanded or removed. If it is kept, the book should be put into a template.
 * 3) I added conversion templates and cut the "further reading" section. Another editor added it to a good deal of ship articles. Parsecboy (talk) 22:14, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) It is factually accurate and verifiable:
 * Not Yet
 * 1) Ref #11 seems to have some problem with the URL title, since the URL seems to be showing up alongside the title.
 * 2) What makes the navweps.com website a Reliable Source?
 * 3) I fixed the ref, and see my comment here regarding Navweaps. Parsecboy (talk) 22:14, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * 4) It is broad in its coverage:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) It is stable:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate:
 * Pass No problems there.
 * 1) Overall:
 * On Hold while a few issues are addressed. — Ed! (talk) 19:09, 16 August 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing the article, Ed. Parsecboy (talk) 22:14, 16 August 2009 (UTC)
 * Very good. Passing the article. — Ed! (talk) 10:36, 17 August 2009 (UTC)