Talk:Mackinac College/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:15, 24 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments
 * "movement, proposed" no comma.


 * Link Mackinac Island in the main body.


 * "of turning the" converting?


 * "charter" is there a relevant link for this?


 * "1965-1970" en-dash.


 * "the Old Mission House, to Mackinac" no comma.


 * "of $1.5 million for" inflate.


 * From whom was the gift?


 * Where are the staff numbers in the infobox referenced?


 * Students and Undergraduates, both representing the same 350? If so, just use Undergraduates, no need for students.


 * "mascot the American Eagle. The" links to a dab.


 * "Mission Point Resort' image is squashing the refs, you could add a clear template after it to relax the columns.


 * Ref 18 has some odd punctuation going on.


 * Why isn't this in Category:1970 disestablishments in Michigan?


 * That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:22, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks for review. I'll get started on it. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:40, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. Here is a picture of my wife and I in 2014 at Mission Point Resort We go to Mackinac Island often and walk all over the resort island  = a very much fun place to go to. It's about 200 miles north of where we live = four hours drive. No cars allowed on the island.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 14:30, 27 September 2021 (UTC)