Talk:Madam C. J. Walker/Archives/2016

Early career passage
The first 3-4 paragaphs in the Career section could use some rework and removal of redundancy. Sarah's name change to Madam C. J. Walker is mentioned twice, as well as A'Lelia's assumption of responsibilities for the mail order business. The chronology is hard to follow. We have the conference in 1917, and then we jump back to 1908 for the move to Pittsburgh. Dgorsline (talk) 01:33, 18 March 2015 (UTC)

Sarasultani (talk) 02:24, 12 May 2015 (UTC)https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Education_Program:Diablo_Valley_College/ENGL_123:_Literature_and_Composition_%22Reading_and_Writing_the_Harlem_Renaissance%22_%28Spring_2015%29


 * I made additional edits that included removing more of the duplicate info; also put content a correct timeline of her career and activist/philanthropy work.Rosalina523 (talk) 22:14, 19 February 2016 (UTC)

Georgia
change ((Georgia)) to ((Georgia (U.S. state)|Georgia))
 * ✅ Thanks for pointing that out - Arjayay (talk) 17:34, 21 February 2016 (UTC)