Talk:Magdalena Neuner/GA1

GA Review
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 * GA review (see here for criteria)

I do not have any problems with passing this as a good article.
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * Many of the references I couldn't check because they weren't in English.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Article issues
Spelling Wikify
 * Fixed costums > customs
 * Could use more wiki links to non-biathlon related articles. i.e intestinal fungus, 2008 German Sportswoman of the Year. I have no idea if these actually have articles, but you get the idea.

Summary
Honestly, I could be really nit picky and pull apart quite a few sentences out of this article as to work on prose, but due to the amount of content and it only being good article status, I think it is substantial enough to pass. It has the potential of a feature article, but needs cleaning up and another peer review in a few months after some more copyediting by dedicated editors to this page would be a good idea. You may also want an editor that speaks German on English Wikipedia to verify these references in a future peer review and add it to the talk page. Anyway, apart from that, the article is comprehensive, has all facts cited and referenced and maintains a NPOV (from what I could gather from English sources). Good work!  JRA _ Westy Qld2  Talk 01:08, 7 September 2009 (UTC)