Talk:Magikarp and Gyarados/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 22:04, 28 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Greenish Pickle! (talk · contribs) 22:51, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

In progress. Greenish Pickle!  (🔔) 22:52, 14 April 2024 (UTC)

Concept

 * "specifically dragons seen in Chinese mythology." (No sourced at the end) Unsourced
 * The next sentence is also unsource

Appearances

 * Link NPC

In anime

 * seems repetitive, reword it into simply just "In anime"
 * "the first one being in Battle Aboard the St. Anne." unsourced?
 * "returned in Pokémon Journeys: The Series" unsourced?

Reception

 * "Magikarp has been regarded as one of the weakest Pokémon in the series, as well as one of the worst Pokémon of all time" Why IGN is the only source cited here? try to find other sources, if you can't then reword the sentence, but the worst part is the IGN source is dead so you could probably end up removing it.
 * Dexerto source seems unreliable
 * NPCs was linked here instead in the "appearances section", so change it.
 * "Paste said it "exemplifies power through perseverance,"[15] and praised it as an iconic staple of the series" Well, paste didn't praised it but "TheGamer", reword it. Also, the add the name of author for the Paste.
 * "core themes of bonding with Pokemon, with The Verge" add the name of author before "The Verge"
 * "The game was also praised for making the joke" Add the author's name and website who praised it.