Talk:Mahanati/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:28, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:28, 1 June 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Non-free use rationale looks good.
 * Serial comma after Prakash Raj.
 * Fixed.
 * That's it here. Lead looks great.
 * Thanks :).

Plot and cast

 * 648 words – plot passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * "a year in coma" "a year in a coma"
 * Fixed.
 * Cast looks good but I would use this template instead.
 * Done.

Production

 * "researching about the actress" "researching the actress"
 * "more of subconscious" "more of a subconscious"
 * "her take up the role" "her to take up the role"
 * Add a serial comma after "Chennai, Mysore".
 * "vitange" might be a typo. Replace it with "vintage".
 * Fixed all.

Themes and influences

 * "interview to The Hindu" "interview with The Hindu"
 * Fixed.
 * This section feels kinda short. I would try expanding it.
 * Yeah, I felt the same here. Expanded it a bit, please have a look. -- Ab207 (talk) 09:37, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

Music

 * Make this a subsection in #Production – (WP:FILMMUSIC).
 * Done.
 * "called the album as Meyer's best work till date" "called the album Meyer's best work to date"
 * Fixed.

Release

 * Add a serial comma after Rangasthalam.
 * Fixed.
 * "through a different perspective" "from a different perspective"
 * Fixed.
 * #Marketing might need to be removed per WP:TRAILER.
 * Removed mundane detailing, though I'd remove the section entirely if you insist. -- Ab207 (talk) 09:37, 9 June 2021 (UTC)

Reception

 * "Savitri's story as a" "Savitri's story a"
 * Fixed.
 * "three stars out five" "three stars out of five"
 * Fixed.
 * #Box_office usually goes above #Critical_reception.
 * Done.

Legacy and accolades

 * No issues in either of these sections.