Talk:Mahmud Mirza Qajar

GOCE Edit Request
Hello! In response to a request from @, I've completed my first pass on this article. This text seemed to use the Oxford comma, so I went with that.

Some things that may need to be resolved:
 * Some topics might be expanded? For example, some prominent people Zia ol-Saltaneh and Mohammad Taqi Sepehr may provide further context on the main subject of this article.
 * Not sure how best to treat Mohammad Taqi Sepehr's name in the article. Just "Sepehr" maybe?
 * In the paragraph starting Mahmud Mirza's chief wife..., we have a list of 3 wives, but perhaps I'm misreading this list, and it's really 4 wives.

Feedback is very much welcome. Thanks! — LumonRedacts 14:21, 6 October 2022 (UTC)