Talk:Mai Masri

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 5 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Warriorzee. Peer reviewers: Feministbooklover, Filmstudent3301A.

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External links modified
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External links modified
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I have just modified 2 external links on Mai Masri. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need the bot to ignore the links, or the page altogether, please visit this simple FaQ for additional information. I made the following changes:
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20061016065443/http://www.dreamsofanation.org/filmmakers.html to http://www.dreamsofanation.org/filmmakers.html
 * Added archive https://web.archive.org/web/20070927035240/http://www.facets.org/asticat?function=web&catname=facets&web=features&path=%2Fdirectors%2Fmasrimai%2Finterviewwithmasri to http://www.facets.org/asticat?function=web&catname=facets&web=features&path=%2Fdirectors%2Fmasrimai%2Finterviewwithmasri

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peer review
I like how organized your article is with separate headings. It makes the content clear and concise. I suggest that the brief blurb at the very beginning to be a little longer, it seems to short compared to everything else and I'm not sure if we get an overall sense of the filmmaker. Also don't forget to attribute the references and information you use. I would also take out thesentence you have under Works and place it somewhere else for cohesion.

Filmstudent3301A (talk) 18:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC) christine