Talk:Maine Pyar Kiya/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Non-free use rationale for the film poster looks good.
 * This link says the runtime is 173 minutes so the 192/125 runtimes need citations.
 * — 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * The 192 minute version still needs a source. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:20, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 * I apologize, just added. Have a look.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 07:27, 21 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "an 1989 Indian Hindi-language" "a 1989 Indian Hindi-language"
 * ✅.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after Ajit Vachani.
 * ✅.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "two individuals".
 * ✅.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "The film released" "The film was released"
 * ✅.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "earning most praise" "earning the most praise"


 * "The film features the score and soundtrack composed by Raamlaxman. Filming predominantly took place in Ooty." These sentences are in the last paragraph after mentioning the film's release/reception. I would suggest moving/merging them into the first paragraph.
 * ✅.— 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "the score and soundtrack composed by Raamlaxman" - can this be changed to simply "music composed by Raamlaxman"?
 * Actually I am not sure if music includes both songs and backgroud music. Hence, I mentioned score and soundtrack individually. Your thoughts?-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:34, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Is it okay to have two paragrphs in lead because if I make it three it gives lots of spaces. Please suggest.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 16:51, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Two-three paragraphs are normal for a film article but for this size, I recommend three. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:53, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

 * No issues here (passes WP:FILMPLOT). Great work!

Production

 * Remove the colon after "additional production credits include".
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after Deepak Tijori.
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "but was replaced" "he was replaced"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "in the last minute" "at the last minute"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "Bhagyashree who had done lead role in" "Bhagyashree, who had a lead role in"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "changes in script" "changes in the script" or "changes to the script"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "eventually Bhagyashree giving nod to the film" - bit wordy so reword.
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "Mohnish Bahl who played villain's role in the film, veteran actress and Bahl's mother Nutan" - same with this sentence.
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "will be remembered" "would be remembered" (already happened)
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Mate, I have made few additions to Casting section. Let me know what you think.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS 🍁 16:50, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Release

 * Remove the comma after Lima.
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:37, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * That's all I could find here.

Soundtrack

 * Make this a "Music" subsection or simply move it under #Production.
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after S. P. Balasubrahmanyam.
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a source to replace the "citation needed" tag.
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "Aaya Mausam Dosti Ka" too features - typo?
 * ? Suggestion please-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Check now. Please let me know if the sentence has got grammatical error.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 07:53, 17 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Looks good . Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:29, 17 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "from a western hit" "by a western hit"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * "too are partly inspired" "were also partly inspired"
 * ✅-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:45, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Accolades

 * Reorder this along with #Release and #Box_office per WP:MOSFILM.
 * It should look like this:
 * ==Release==
 * ==Reception==
 * ===Box office===
 * ===Accolades===
 * Take a look now.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:44, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:53, 16 June 2021 (UTC)


 * Were there no reviews for this movie?
 * Sure. Allow me a day or two to have it.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 18:43, 16 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Couldn't find much information related to reviews. However have added a little bit.-- 25 CENTS VICTORIOUS ☣✅ 11:35, 18 June 2021 (UTC)