Talk:Majed Abu Maraheel/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Sawyer-mcdonell (talk · contribs) 19:36, 1 March 2024 (UTC)


 * not a requirement for GA, but I think the "personal life" section, being so short, could be merged into the "early life" section and turned into "early and personal life" or something along those lines. I'm not sure what the MOS (or WP guideline etc) is for the "achievements" box, but it might be better as a subsection of the "career" section rather than entirely as its own section. let me know what you think.
 * I flipped through the other athletics GAs; all of them with a table like that had it as its own achievements section, so I'll probably defer to that convention for this. Good idea that the personal life can be merged; I did so. - G
 * not a requirement for GA, but I think the "personal life" section, being so short, could be merged into the "early life" section and turned into "early and personal life" or something along those lines. I'm not sure what the MOS (or WP guideline etc) is for the "achievements" box, but it might be better as a subsection of the "career" section rather than entirely as its own section. let me know what you think.
 * I flipped through the other athletics GAs; all of them with a table like that had it as its own achievements section, so I'll probably defer to that convention for this. Good idea that the personal life can be merged; I did so. - G


 * can't access some of the sources, but the ones I checked all have good text-source integrity. I rearranged a couple of cites to match the text more closely.
 * Oh nice, thank you. - G
 * can't access some of the sources, but the ones I checked all have good text-source integrity. I rearranged a couple of cites to match the text more closely.
 * Oh nice, thank you. - G



✅
 * excellent job with an article that's both a BLP & ARBPIA-related :)

✅


 * I like the photo of Nuseirat camp; it gives good context.
 * @Arconning @Generalissima I've done my initial review; I'll continue looking through it in case I notice anything else, but overall it's a really solid article. I've got a couple of non-strictly-binding suggestions. Thanks for your nomination! sawyer  * he/they *  talk  02:20, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
 * I like the photo of Nuseirat camp; it gives good context.
 * @Arconning @Generalissima I've done my initial review; I'll continue looking through it in case I notice anything else, but overall it's a really solid article. I've got a couple of non-strictly-binding suggestions. Thanks for your nomination! sawyer  * he/they *  talk  02:20, 2 March 2024 (UTC)


 * Rad, responded to your feedback. Generalissima (talk) 03:12, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
 * Awesome, looks great. Congrats guys! sawyer  * he/they *  talk  03:18, 2 March 2024 (UTC)