Talk:Making Out (song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 11:37, 16 September 2016 (UTC)

Soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:37, 16 September 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * You may remove "rock" and leave it only with "band"
 * It was released → It was made available (to avoid word repetitions)
 * Add a comma after "studio album"
 * remix of single → remix of the single
 * add year of release in brackets after the song's title
 * The composition → The recording
 * remove "electronica"
 * and by No Doubt → remove "by" here
 * song, the lyrics → song, its lyrics
 * music critics. Several critics pointed → music critics, with several of them pointing out
 * others criticized → others criticizing

Infobox

 * Album Version → album version

Background and composition

 * The song was recorded → The track was recorded (to avoid word repetitions)
 * set "exclusively" before "released"
 * Set release year in brackets after song's title.
 * interlude, accompanied → interlude, which is accompanied
 * Set comma after "seventh studio album"
 * Stefani turns → The singer turns (word repetition)

Critical reception

 * disliked the track's → disliked the song's (word rep.)
 * it and Rockwell's → it and American singer Rockwell's
 * Add a comma after "PopMatters"

Credits and personnel

 * Credits and personnel adapted from Rock Steady liner notes, Interscope Records → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Rock Steady.

Release history

 * Unlink format and and label
 * Interscope Records → Interscope

Outcome
I've put this for 7 days. Good luck with editing and don't forget to ping me when you're ready with this. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 00:08, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
 * All done! Thanks so much! Carbrera (talk) 01:44, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:33, 17 September 2016 (UTC)