Talk:Making the desert bloom

Expanding on sections
I think it's important to write more about the history of kibbutzim here, although I do not know that history well. Also, perhaps expanding on historical agricultural practices and general Palestinian perspectives. It's just a start for now. digiulio8 (talk) 00:54, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Nice work

North8000 (talk) 22:05, 30 January 2024 (UTC)