Talk:Mal Benning/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:14, 31 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's about all I have for now. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 19:24, 31 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Avoid single-sentence paras.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * The end of the first sentence and beginning of the second sentence are somewhat repetitive, about his position.
 * Removed the first instance.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "moved to left-back" link that position first time in main body.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "joined Southern League club" maybe clarify this was non-League?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * We have an article about professional football I think which could be linked.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "he was offered his first professional contract " vs "signed his first professional deal" so did he reject the first offer?
 * That's strange, we'll go with the BBC source.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * " the 2012–13 season" put season inside the pipe.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "15 starts and three" 15/3 or fifteen/three.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "as the "Stags" posted" that nickname is not explained nor intuitive.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "was sent off in" link.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "newly appointed" hyphen.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "2018–19 season" season inside pipe.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "in fourth-place" no hyphen.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "the play-offs despite" link specific.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "converting his penalty" link.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * No need to link Mexico.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * " the 2019–20 season" season inside pipe.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "21st on points per game" find a good link for PPG.
 * Did the closest I could find.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "the 2020–21 season" season inside pipe.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "represent India in August" perhaps "the India national team"?
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * "attacking left-back, who is also " overlinked although to a different target.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Scorelines in ref titles should use en-dash, not hyphen.
 * Done.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
 * OKay thank you, I have addressed those points.--EchetusXe 09:32, 1 September 2021 (UTC)