Talk:Malayanil

GOCE copyedit request
Hello again, ! I'm taking a look at another article of yours, and I have a few questions:
 * His father was on a high designation in a cotton mill: What does "high designation" mean? High-ranking position? Literally high up above the sea?
 * High-ranking position. The reference does not specify the position. ✅ Changed to High-ranking position


 * He matriculated in 1908: I have since changed "matriculated" to "enrolled in university". Does it say which university he entered?
 * Matriculation was a completion of schooling at 10th level. See Matriculation. "Enrolled in university" would be not true. So should be reverted. ✅ reverted.
 * Thanks for the clarification. I've updated the link to point to the proper section when it is clicked on.


 * In 1916, he took a job as a lawyer in a firm of solicitor Bhaishankar Kanga: The solicitor's name is Bhaishankar Kanga? He has multiple firms?
 * Bhaishankar Kanga is a solicitor's name. Name of his firm is not mentioned in reference. I don't know if he had any other firms. ✅ removed "one of".


 * During his graduation years: Is this before or after he graduated?
 * When he was then studying in a course. ✅ changed to study years. Is it OK?
 * Is this before he matriculated?
 * No, between 1909 and 1912, when he was studying BA from the University of Bombay.
 * ✅. I've copyedited that with the assumption that his years of studying are in the source provided.


 * He came in contact with Haji Mohammed Allarakha Shivji who encouraged him to write a short story "Govalani" which was published in his magazine: Emphasis added. "His" meaning "Shivji's"?
 * Yes, "His" meaning "Shivji's".


 * He pioneered the modern Gujarati short story writing: Just him? Or was he one of few?
 * He is generally considered as a pioneer of "modern" short stories. His contemporaries were writing short stories but not according to "modern" short story criteria.


 * He had also written about 250 poems including some humourous poems: Is he well known for his humourous poems?
 * Yes, he is known for his humour and humorous poems so should be included.-Nizil (talk) 06:22, 28 February 2020 (UTC)
 * , I have answered your questions. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 06:25, 28 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the answers; the questions that I am satisfied with being answered have been struck out. There's still one more question about where he was studying when he was writing poems (see above). -- Tenryuu (🐲 • 💬 • 🌟) 07:18, 28 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Replied. See above. Please copyedit a note which I have added.-Nizil (talk) 07:28, 28 February 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the answer. I'll give it another final look when I wake up tomorrow before considering it complete. -- Tenryuu (🐲 • 💬 • 🌟) 07:39, 28 February 2020 (UTC)